Hey Faith! Saw you didn't have a reply yet so I figured I would- plus I really enjoyed your presentation in class! I liked how you began your description by laying out the setting (I'll need to go back and add this to mine!). It helped me have a more complete picture in my mind. I also think you did well in explaining how the intricacies of the dance worked (last paragraph pulls it together).
If I were to offer a suggestion, it would be to add maybe a bit more detail into the costumes that are being worn (I see you did for the ladies, maybe for the men?). And perhaps go more in depth about how people are paired even today. Are adults, given the times, allowed to pair same sex occasionally?
But those are just small suggestions- it was hard to criticize this piece! Well done!
If I were to offer a suggestion, it would be to add maybe a bit more detail into the costumes that are being worn (I see you did for the ladies, maybe for the men?). And perhaps go more in depth about how people are paired even today. Are adults, given the times, allowed to pair same sex occasionally?
But those are just small suggestions- it was hard to criticize this piece! Well done!