Maya, Hicks

Maya, Hicks

by Maya Hicks -
Number of replies: 4

https://docs.google.com/document/d/169pYQUCpf4oNsJU51nwCggpUgs5HH2gXBdPF-kt8eRs/edit?usp=sharing

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by Camille Hart -
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Re: Maya, Hicks

by Camille Hart -
The argument you are making is very clear and I think the way you use the quotes is also really good. The paragraphs follow the meal plan, the claims follow a logical order, and everything follows MLA format. The only problem that I can see is missing citations here and there but it looks like you have placeholders for that. At points it felt like a lot of summary but overall I enjoyed reading it (especially the note at the end).