I couldn't get my map onto the forum, so I attached my word document below:
Hi Nathan! I like the way you incorporated an analysis of public transportation. I usually think its primary purpose is to bring people into the big city, but the way you emphasized the reverse of that made me think how well connected the suburbs are to one another, and that they bring suburbs together, but can also separate them from each other by being labeled as different "destinations" from one another by these public transportation systems.
Hello Nathan! What a wonderful analysis of Keswick Villiage. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your paper as I can see the pride you have in this neighborhood through your writing. It seems this area is a large part of your identity. I thought your analysis of the racial diversity in Keswick Villiage was very good, but I would love to learn more about why it is the way that it is. You mentioned redlining, but I would love to know what other aspects of life this affects for residents living in and around the neighborhood. All in all, a great paper. Thank you for sharing!