Descriptive Writing Excerpt (Post here)
Descriptive Writing Excerpt (Post here)
Students will focus on writing descriptively about their chosen work, using vivid language, analogies, and poetic images to convey the tone, structure, movement qualities, and overall design of the dance; 500–800 words. As all description is already interpretation, these descriptive passages of writing will reveal how the dance makes meaning as well as what it “looks” like.
Each student should read another students’ excerpt and offer them some peer-review feedback.
First, carefully read through your assigned passage. You may want to do this twice to really absorb it.Second, highlight words, phrases, or images that are particularly descriptive. You may need to copy and paste them into your comments on the original post.
Third, ask for MORE of something in particular: details about music, space, costuming, gesture, emotion or mood, speed, rhythm, or timing? relationships between dancers? more vivid adjectives or adverbs? more action verbs? attention to the dance’s structure? deeper interpretation/analysis of the work or event’s meaning?
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